My open window
invites you to enter.
I slumber, restless,
throat exposed,
racing pulse taunting
your ravaged hunger.
Bathed in black
you come to me,
awaken desires burried
by history's torment.
I am only yours.
Forever, I will wander
inside your shadow.
Bowed by love,
I kneel for you.
What saving taste
floods your lips
as my heart
explodes in you.
We drift
through the open window.
Cool passion dying
on an abandoned bed
as I leave this world
with you.
Every single word keeps the reader enthralled Viola...amazing! ! Hang on, just gonna close my mouth! ! ...top 10++ no less....*dc* x
Oooooohh..I really liked this piece...fantastic imagery that drips down the page..a brilliant write with bite! ! ! Best wishes Jon
Great imagery. I can actually visualize the slow and deep bite of an exposed neck, while a sweat glistened chest heaves: What saving taste floods your lips as my heart explodes in you. Excellent as always. Stone
Cute! ! But to answer your last line, who doesnt? ? ? ME! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
that is freaking amazing. you're right. i've got a thing for 'em too. Ever read the series by stephenie meyer?