The Turning Of The Page Poem by David Wood

The Turning Of The Page

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The monastery sat high on a hill closer to heaven,
Four tired buildings facing each other forming a
Square with a grass covered courtyard containing
Pretty border flowers seeking God’s forgiveness.
Poppies gazed from a farmer’s field mingling with
Corn surrounded by broken hedges that once
Formed a fairly straight line.

What took us by surprise was the silence. The only
Sound was birdsong rising above the breeze,
And the absence of monks distorted the picture,
Presumably they were at prayer or working in their
Vegetable or herb garden. A bell sounded like an
Orchestra in the silence of the day as the world
Turned another page.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 18 June 2013

Serene atmosphere of the monastery is wonderfully described. Nice poem.

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Paul Brookes 18 June 2013

Or was it the ghosts of the past settling around you, the silence of the dead! ! ! ! A lovely gentle poem thanks for sharing BB : O)

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Dave Walker 18 June 2013

A fantastic poem, the monks live their life to the silence.

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Patricia Grantham 18 June 2013

I love this poem. It speaks of a time when peace was at the foremost of things. We have a monastery out in the country where I live. Silence is golden as the saying goes. Enjoyed this write. So soothing!

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 18 June 2013

Lovely write David, you took me there with you. Siya_! !

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Heather Wilkins 24 June 2013

nice imagery picture perfect. enjoyed the write

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Valerie Dohren 20 June 2013

You paint a lovely scene here David, one of peace and tranquility.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 June 2013

Serenety of words and clarity in your poem sat high near to heaven as I think love you

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Neela Nath Das 19 June 2013

So nice imagery! A picture on serene canvas.Loved.

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Unwritten Soul 19 June 2013

As if your hand full of colors and paint, you did a nice painting by pasting words on canvas for poetry vibrant! nice n beautiful_Soul

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