The River From The Sky Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

The River From The Sky

Rating: 4.0


Falling from above
on the mountains
cruising in the land
the blue waters
pouring the sweet
piercing the chaste
humbling the beast
the narrow run
to the broad passage
rising to endanger
drying to perish
adoring idol
affable deity
ushering divinity
evaporating tears
pure mixture of river.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
AtreyaSarma Uppaluri 09 October 2009

Your delineation of the course and power of the river has been elegantly and evocatively done. # 10.

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C. P. Sharma 03 October 2009

Great poetry on river written in reverential mood.10++++++++++for it CP

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 22 July 2009

pouring the sweet piercing the chaste humbling the beast.... excellent mam, so deep thought.............

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