The Mocking Two... Poem by Sandra Martyres

The Mocking Two...

Rating: 4.5


You mock me
Because I am not pretty
You mock me
Coz your friends are more witty
You mock me
For singing this little ditty
But I mock you
Because you are not true
I mock you
For putting me in this stew
And I mock you
Because you are you
About that there is
Nothing you or I can do

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
, aryaindia 29 April 2009

A sad situation to be in but there is a way out to find the better things in both and to be happy about that. arya

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Wojja Fink 29 April 2009

when one and one is one and the mocking is all done the mocking bird just flies and laughter is more fun.............

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Fiona Davidson 29 April 2009

This is a great Sandra...you have captured the childishness of the mockers perfectly here...well done...Fi 10+++

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Patti Masterman 01 September 2009

What a great twist to throw back on the mockers..I always did manage to find men who made fun of me..what is that about anyway? (smile)

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Catrina Heart 10 May 2009

what is due was given...............nice rhyming then.

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Reetessh Sabrr 01 May 2009

whos the real mock is the talk of the town

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Sathyanarayana M V S 30 April 2009

This is a very very good poem Sandra. I must appreciate your selection of subjects for poetry. Very good, similar to my poem 'Fall Guy'

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Kesav Easwaran 30 April 2009

good piece...not a mockery of poetic parameters...thanks Sandra...10

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