The Mistakes I Have Made.... Poem by Patricia Gale

The Mistakes I Have Made....

Rating: 5.0


Costing great heartache
Some were my fault others were at their sake
Misguided love….
I have placed them on the wings of a dove
Flying to the great open
Carried to the ocean

All behind….they will never find me
Locked tight, I have thrown away the key
Buried deep with the lost never to rise again
Never again shall they reign

Ready to start a new
Free from the past the chains that have held me
The memories of the bad disappear, a new day to dawn
Ready to trust again...the haunting memories long gone
Buried deep on the ocean floor
Shipwrecked fools shall be no more

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Jani 06 May 2014

yes I agree this is a good piece

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Meggie Gultiano 25 February 2008

There is always a God who will see you through, the God of New Beginning..A humbling attitude..God will love you more..i love you, sis.. Love, Meggie

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Theodora Onken 30 June 2007

Tara is right...Awesome attitude, and grand new start. We all have to do this at one time or another. I did mine many years ago, with a lot of help from God! Great optimistic write, Theo

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That's the attitude! I enjoy the way you continue the analogy through. t x

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