Patricia Gale


Circles And Lines - Poem by Patricia Gale

With pen in hand my mind begins to wonder
Circles and lines half written
Then your name appears
Next to I love you

I try not to think of you
But the heart has a mind of its own
Being almost independent and strong willed
It has the say for the night

The paper becomes filled with thoughts of you
Desires, longing moments
Dream states left unvisited
A sigh forms and it begins again

Circles and lines
Dots and hoops
Hearts filled with I love you
Creating the dream that comes every night


Comments about Circles And Lines by Patricia Gale

  • Tom Allport (5/16/2017 5:13:00 PM)


    a very romantic thoughtful poem of heartfelt love? .......well written (Report) Reply

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  • (2/2/2017 10:48:00 PM)


    Circles and lines and dots of Hope. Heartiest Congrats on member poet of the Day. (Report) Reply

  • Christina Simmons (2/2/2017 1:39:00 PM)

    Circles And Lines:
    WOW! Blew me completely away! ! ! Beautiful, wonderful words. Very descriptive verses.
    Well done for getting recognition for the day.
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  • Electric Lady (2/2/2017 11:37:00 AM)


    Aww this is incredibly romantic. My heart melts when I read poems like this. And I love how this one comes from your heart as well as your soul. Congratulations! (Report) Reply

  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (2/2/2017 10:29:00 AM)

    Circles And Lines
    No wonder people go mad with love. Hearts of true love can use practically anything to express his/her feelings, just the same way poetess here uses circles and lines. Congrats for being the member's PoD. Thanks for the poem of profundity. (Report) Reply

  • Clarence Prince (2/2/2017 9:12:00 AM)


    ...heart has a mind of its own,
    but there is power in I love you!
    (Report) Reply

  • Lantz Pierre (2/2/2017 9:09:00 AM)


    A poem of miraculous discovery. Miraculous to discover something obvious, in full view, but not consciously observed. Until the truth, like geometry, cannot be evaded, cannot be questioned. The most difficult thing is often the most simple. This poem blows the obscuring dust off the heart with gentlest of breath. (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (2/2/2017 8:46:00 AM)


    A sweet love poem where rhymes of love is written in dots, circles and lines. Enjoyed. Congratulation. (Report) Reply

  • Robert Murray Smith (2/2/2017 4:38:00 AM)

    Love
    Patricia,

    Love has a way of expressing itself. Your poem has done that very well..+++10

    This poem deserves the category of poem of the day. Congratulations.

    You will like my A Hauntingly Beautiful Word.

    Robert
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  • Tom Allport (2/2/2017 4:28:00 AM)

    tom allport
    a nice poem about circles and lines and what is going on in one's mind. (Report) Reply

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (2/2/2017 1:59:00 AM)


    Awesome and sweet! ! ! ! ! Congrats on being selected......😍 (Report) Reply

  • Terry Craddock (2/2/2017 1:54:00 AM)


    'I try not to think of you
    But the heart has a mind of its own
    Being almost independent and strong willed
    It has the say for the night'

    like every stanza in this poem these sentiments are wonderfully expressed, the heart is often rules the quiet of the night, thoughts desires dream states manifest in lines dots circles hoops ever looping back to the one loved in an inescapeable I Love You; a beautifully crafted poem
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  • Kim Barney (2/2/2017 12:34:00 AM)


    You have many wonderful comments on this poem already, simply because it is very well done. Congrats on having it chosen as poem of the day! (Report) Reply

  • Susan Williams (2/2/2016 10:27:00 PM)


    Circles and lines appear.... I love how simply and elegantly you speak of the freehand expression of our hearts (Report) Reply

  • Bernard Snyder (2/2/2016 10:01:00 AM)


    Wow Patricia. One of the most beautiful poems I've ever heard. Great write. (Report) Reply

  • Anish Debnath (2/2/2016 8:26:00 AM)


    The thought of our passionate love always has filled our heart at the time of study.We all faced this situation at least once a life.Nice poem Patricia Gale. (Report) Reply

  • Girija Ksk (2/2/2016 2:59:00 AM)


    The poem conveys the feeling intended. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (2/2/2016 2:12:00 AM)


    'Circles and lines
    Dots and hoops
    Hearts filled with I love you
    Creating the dream that comes every night'

    Beautifully said. Sometimes we cannot but think about that one person we love.. Thank you.
    (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (2/2/2016 12:47:00 AM)


    Working together with the muse of love. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (2/2/2016 12:43:00 AM)


    Lovely poem....Pen in hand and your name pops up besides I love you...Superb. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 15, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 26, 2011


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