My mind reels with words of love, desire and passion
I try so desperately to grasp
lines and verses just something… to tell how I feel
They race around my heart through my soul leaving my mind dazed
Walking on clouds lost in a lovers haze
I find the only ones I grasp, are just simple words
That stands out like a beacon in the night….
I love you
How wonderful. A poet in love will indeed find the words when they come out of the haze or even whilst during the haze. Power to your pen and cannot wait to see some passionate prose. HG: -) xx
you are indeed the Poet in Love. Love this, my friend.Wonderful..
A simplistic approach is sometimes the most wanted and direct path to under standing ideas and ideals. Great poem. I had'da giv'vit a ten'ner, fer sure! God bless all poets and readers alike-MJG.
A poet is not afraid to express his or her love, exploring the wonders of their love.. Andrew 10
Poetry and love are like our two eyes...........let the words reel as it is then grasp firmly! You added some ingredients to this rare love.
They race around my heart through my soul leaving my mind dazed Rachel Ann Butler
When you say those words the way you say it can make it so wonderful. Lovely Poetry this one..............
lovely expressionate piece of loving words of poetic loveliness.....well written...simply lovely Best of Health & Happiness Jon
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Patricia I am so happy for you he is a very lucky man to have such beauty in all forms in his arms Chris 10