The Mistakes Done Poem by Ketan Hukare

The Mistakes Done



I sat at the edge of a pond and threw stones
I heard whooping sound mixed with dropping tone
I wandered how fish would behave
When they would ride on my mysterious wave
Then I started throwing some big stone again
And I started dreaming of the days again
The days when the sun danced
When clouds clapped and rain enhanced.
But it was dark so I threw stones
Heard whooping sound mixed with dropping tone.
I waited for my eyes to see the morning light
I waited my face to become alluring bright.
I believed I was in an ambient place
But as I threw stones I didn't see the water raised
Alas! I was already drowned.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eindaray Kyaw 05 October 2012

Superb idea rushing from a young, brilliant one I appreciate this....dear Keep it up!

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