The Kissing Merry-Go-Round Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

The Kissing Merry-Go-Round

Rating: 5.0


‘What lips my lips have kissed'
by Edna St. Vincent Millay
has inspired me to share with you
these humble thoughts today.

There were a few lips that I kissed
in days of yesteryear,
and many more I sadly missed
could have been mine; it's clear.

Sweet Geraldine with eyes of green
just loved to kiss the guys.
If germs from me went from her lips
to Lloyd, it's no surprise.

I know he passed some germs to me
by way of Anne Marie,
and Lyman got some germs from Joe
because of AnnaLee.

There were some illnesses we got,
but such was meant to be,
because we did our best to spread
the herd immunity!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I just finished reading ‘What Lips My Lips Have Kissed' by Edna St. Vincent Millay, and thought it was one of the best poems ever, a beautiful sonnet. Immediately afterword, I wrote this poem. Names used are real people from my childhood and youth. All but one lived in my home town, and the other lived in the next-closest town just a few miles away. I can't guarantee that all of these people really did kiss each other, however. 4 September 2022 4: 04 p.m. MDT
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 05 September 2022

Kim, YOUR POETRY ALWAYS BRIGHTENS MY DAY! Even while I'm listening to Gordon Lightfoot's sad songs.

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Kim Barney 05 September 2022

Ah, Richard, thanks so much for the comment. I love Gordon Lightfoot's singing.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 September 2022

The lips that have kissed. A series of them spreading germs from one to another. A remarkable poem dear Kim. Your poems are always interesting and funny too. I enjoy reading them.....10

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Kim Barney 05 September 2022

Thank you so much for commenting, dear Geeta.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 05 September 2022

Bravo I got to look that up Bravo!

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Bri Edwards 23 September 2022

My first two comments are items I copied and pasted here from my online search. : ) bri Yes, humans are only specialized cows and pigs.

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Bri Edwards 23 September 2022

This immunity can be developed naturally when the body makes antibodies after a viral infection that can help fight the infection better the next time. Herd immunity can also happen through vaccination.

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Bri Edwards 23 September 2022

How Does Herd Immunity Work? Herd immunity is something that happens when a large number of people in a community develop immunity—or the body's own protection—against a contagious disease.

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Bri Edwards 23 September 2022

I'm back AGAIN.

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Bri Edwards 21 September 2022

I may come back to read again and comment. Remind me. I want to get off PC now! bri : )

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