Mischievous Toys Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Mischievous Toys

Rating: 5.0


Sometimes I dream that while I sleep
my toys get up and start to creep
around the room and on my bed
and pull my hair and poke my head.

When my eyes open, I was wrong;
they're back on shelves where they belong,
except they sometimes leave a trace;
a thing or two seems out of place.

My little train is off the track,
and I was sure I'd put it back.
So are these rascals what they seem?
Do they do mischief while I dream?

Why don't they move around by day
so I could have more fun at play?
It would be nice if they would talk
and let me watch them while they walk.

One of these nights I'll stay awake
and they will make some big mistake
and let me catch them if they dare
to poke my head or pull my hair.

Then I will laugh and so will they,
and all of us will join in play,
and you'll see how this story ends:
we'll all become the best of friends!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem took third place in the 2022 Arizona State Poetry Society annual contest in Category 10: Rhyming Poem for Children. It is published on page 116 of their book Sandcutters 2022.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Belle Wassermeister 12 January 2023

A fun poem for children. Very nice rhymes and rhythm. Congratulations on placing in the contest!

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Kim Barney 12 January 2023

Thank you, Belle. This was one of thirty of my poems that placed or got honorable mentions last year.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 12 January 2023

It should have received first prize Kim Amazing

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Kim Barney 12 January 2023

Dear LeeAnn, thank you! The judge liked two other poems better...

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David Wood 12 January 2023

Should have been First Prize it's brilliant! !

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Kevin Hulme 26 February 2023

Very Good. Bit Scary. That's me looking under the bed before I retire.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 23 February 2023

A marvellous fun poem that deserves 100 and more. And to my favourite as well.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 23 February 2023

Heartiest Congratulations dear Kim. I can see all your toys coming alive dancing and singing.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 23 February 2023

What a lovely poem Kim. So happy to see it first thing in the morning. So joyful and entertaining.

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Kevin Hulme 23 February 2023

Nice One. Bit scary. That's me looking under the bed tonight before I retire.

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