krishnakumar chandrasekar nair

Freshman - 942 Points (1964 and doing pretty good.. / Thiruvalla, Kerala)

The Girl Child....... - Poem by krishnakumar chandrasekar nair

Pots and pans, Pots and pans,
This is all I've got to do
Cook and wash the live long day
A girl child whose future is doomed.

My brothers go to school every day
while I endlessly mop and broom
'cause I've heard my parents say
'you will be a bride now too soon'

'Then you will be sent so far away
To the house of your bride groom
But your brothers will herein happily stay
With their brides to endlessly brush and broom


Poet's Notes about The Poem

A common tale for the poor girl child in Indian villages.......

Comments about The Girl Child....... by krishnakumar chandrasekar nair

  • Veteran Poet - 1,733 Points Dinesh Nair (5/14/2014 11:27:00 AM)

    Why Indian villages alone? We can spot them all throughout the happening world. A fine write Srikumarji.. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 774 Points Juan Olivarez (5/13/2014 11:27:00 AM)

    The differances society inflicts. Excellent poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shobana Gomes (5/11/2014 10:37:00 PM)

    I hope things change for the girl child and she is liberated soon. A very cleverly laid out poem and one with a deep meaning to it. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 703 Points David Dale Kush (5/7/2014 5:48:00 PM)

    I know to well India of the plight of the India girl child A man from my church has been working to change their lives with the Remia project One man who has been making a difference In India all on his own with the help of God read my poem Mother India (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 5, 2014



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