krishnakumar chandrasekar nair

Veteran Poet - 1,115 Points (1964 and doing pretty good.. / Thiruvalla, Kerala)

A Love Affair That Never Was.... - Poem by krishnakumar chandrasekar nair

I was too hesitant to come
You were too hesitant to call
Times chariot went speeding by
Now curtains have begun to fall....

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Certain things are best kept mysterious so that they remain as ever green secrets.

Comments about A Love Affair That Never Was.... by krishnakumar chandrasekar nair

  • Gold Star - 17,437 Points Daniel Brick (5/4/2015 11:52:00 PM)

    Something must have happened between lines 2 and 4 which I cannot deduce. It seems both parties are paralyzed into inaction. Then we get the marvelous image from Andrew Marvell (one of my favorites too) and then curtains are coming down which your notes suggests are to cover up intimacy. So I'm assuming the fleeting quality of life made these two finally establish contact. If so, they are also fulfilling the theme of Marvell's poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 8,224 Points Mj Lemon (4/28/2015 5:01:00 PM)

    Such a great poem. So much said in so few words. You leave us with a poignant reminder of how much loss can be suffered when we hesitate. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,400 Points Madathil Rajendran Nair (4/18/2015 8:20:00 PM)

    Yes. Short and beautiful about missing the bus. It happens to many. But, there indeed is a sweetness about it. I get a sense from the last line that it is all still not over. Why don't you run after the bus and manage to get in? ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (6/20/2014 9:23:00 AM)

    A Fantastic poem. Short and sweet... said in few words... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 7 Points Neethu Prasanna (6/19/2014 1:30:00 AM)

    Short but well said (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,224 Points Adeline Foster (2/23/2014 2:54:00 PM)

    Wow do I like it. Read mine - How Long Is Forever -
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,582 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (12/24/2013 4:47:00 PM)

    What if? What might have been? Oh for another chance to love! Please somebody turn bak the hand of time! Alas it may be forever too late.Pregnant with the sperm of lost opportunity. So short yet so significant. Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Fiona Schwartzinoff (12/19/2013 8:06:00 PM)

    I like the title... The poem too. :) You have a strong voice in your poetry. I enjoy hearing it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 109 Points Rusty Gibson (11/1/2013 10:07:00 AM)

    I Like this and relate to it.
    Good Job! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,162 Points David Mclansky (11/1/2013 8:27:00 AM)

    An exceptional poem. It auggest the tragedy in a quiet way rather thab spelling it out in detail, David (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,848 Points Ken E Hall (10/24/2013 3:08:00 AM)

    Goodbye before hello too late to strike while its hot... A love affair that never was... (A love affair that never was...perfect title...regards (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,112 Points Heather Wilkins (10/21/2013 11:02:00 AM)

    short and sweet. In a relationship someone must break the ice step up and say hi. love this (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,160 Points Neela Nath Das (10/19/2013 10:29:00 PM)

    Brevity of expression with profound thought.Intriguing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,905 Points David Wood (10/19/2013 5:08:00 AM)

    Grasp happiness where and when you can even when time goes so quickly. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 368 Points Poetheart Morgan (10/17/2013 11:16:00 AM)

    You know Why? Because we love secrets and forbidden things more than reality (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 13, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, October 25, 2013

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