***the Floral Petal Dress*** Poem by Ken e Hall

***the Floral Petal Dress***

Rating: 3.1


The cold morning wind clinically
Undresses the flower’s petal dress,
Still standing tall the birth of seeds begins
Their random atmospheric journey,
Pollination primed by the winged midwife,
Rising higher o’er hills and vale for a new life
Twisting and waving to friends flying by.
The sun shows his early warm face as
He’s calming the wind to a gentle lull,
A sign for all the seeds to spiral down
To their resting place where nature has sewn,
Some land right onto a sheep’s ear
A quick shake and their off no fear,
Then more fall on a cow’s tail
With a moo and a flick no problems avail,
They all land safely and will sleep until spring,
Then will wake and grow when the birdies do sing.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 31 December 2011

Wow, it's an amazing poem! ! ! Top marks! ! !

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Chris Zachariou 10 August 2014

Wonderfully written. The regeneration of nature is always a miracle in my eyes and you have captured this in all its beauty.

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 August 2013

Wow. Beautiful poem..Loved reading it..

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Sally Plumb Plumb 03 September 2012

An educational journey.

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Hans Vr 14 January 2012

Excellent poem. The images of the midwife and all others are very well chosen to describe this wonderful part of nature.

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Ramesh Rai 31 December 2011

REALLY AMAZING POEM, WISH YOU A HAPPY NEW YEAR. WITH KIND REGARDS

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