*** Dancing In Flowers *** Poem by Ken e Hall

*** Dancing In Flowers ***

Rating: 2.7


You're dancing in flowers this lover's fair
I'm stepping on clouds floating on air,
Swinging on stars dreaming on cue
Sliding down rainbows nearer to you,

You hide behind daisies with buttercup class
Still peeking thru' locks of a golden haired lass,
A bunny falls back as you quickly dance by
As I float down from the super blue sky.

Ah, I see you soft an' so still in a beautiful pose
Smiling hiding in the folds of a rose,
For a kiss indeed I miss thorns so scary,
Inside the rose it's all in a day's work for the love
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of a fairy.

Wednesday, June 1, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chris Zachariou 12 July 2014

Wonderful poem. It takes me to another world where there is magic and wonder. And the sweetness of love, great.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 04 May 2014

a very profound poem...writing at it's best! I loved this beautiful piece

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Valsa George 30 June 2014

The dance and movements of this fairy are so delicate and sweet.....! I visualize her hiding and smiling in the folds of a rose..... Just lovely! !

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 08 February 2015

Hello poet Ken. This was an absolutely charming poem, well done. Loyd Taylor

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Hazel Durham 25 February 2015

Such a beautiful, charming poem with inspired lines that give a touch of magic to this truly delightful poem!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 06 May 2018

Sweet and enjoyable.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 03 September 2017

Lovely light piece of work shared. Enjoyed.

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Pamela Sinicrope 23 November 2015

Wow! This was the best imagery. I felt just like a love fairy as I read it. I wish I could slide down a love rainbow! The imagery at the end got a bit more complex, which kept the poem interesting. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Thanks!

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 October 2015

You're dancing in flowers this lover's fair I'm stepping on clouds floating on air, Swinging on stars dreaming on cue Sliding down rainbows nearer to you, such a lovely poem with lots and lots of images. your imagination is amazing. i loved reading it. thank you very much

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 30 September 2015

Verily, a lovely rhyming verse

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