Treasure Island

Ken e Hall

(Last Century / England-Now Australian Citizen)

*** Dancing in Flowers ***

You're dancing in flowers this lover's fair
I'm stepping on clouds floating on air,
Swinging on stars dreaming on cue
Sliding down rainbows nearer to you,

You hide behind daisies with buttercup class
Still peeking the locks of a golden haired lass,
A bunny falls back as you quickly dance by
As I float down from the super blue sky.

Ah, I see you soft an' so still in a beautiful pose
Smiling hiding in the folds of a rose,
For a kiss indeed I miss thorns so scary,
Inside the rose it's all in a day's work for the love
......................................... ....................
of a fairy.

Submitted: Wednesday, June 01, 2011
Edited: Tuesday, January 29, 2013

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  • Chris Zachariou (7/12/2014 6:35:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem. It takes me to another world where there is magic and wonder. And the sweetness of love, great. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (6/30/2014 5:37:00 AM)

    The dance and movements of this fairy are so delicate and sweet.....! I visualize her hiding and smiling in the folds of a rose..... Just lovely! ! (Report) Reply

  • Colleen Courtney (6/20/2014 6:32:00 AM)

    Oh! As a lover of fairies, unicorns and all things mystical and whimsical, I can't help but not fall in love with this poem! Had me enchanted from that wonderful first stanza! Have already added to my list of favorites! (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (8/15/2013 8:14:00 PM)

    A very nice lilting poem. So daintily put in details that it
    makes me feel as if I was just a little girl singing the song
    ring-around-the rosy pockets full of posies. Beautifully
    written Ken (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/31/2012 6:07:00 AM)

    So inside the rose it�s all in a day�s work for the love
    ............................................................. of a fairy... so lovely imagination nicely portrayed....10 (Report) Reply

  • Terence George Craddock (9/19/2011 11:51:00 PM)

    Dancing In Flowers At A Lover’s Fair

    ever since all Ken's dancing on ship cruises
    every time you mention dancing I have visions
    of legendary Fred Astaire and Ginger Rodgers
    I see them dance floral scenes among flowers

    Copyright © Terence George Craddock (Report) Reply

  • Malaya Roses (6/3/2011 6:37:00 AM)

    A fairy tales of love in such soothing passion... complexity in love and feeling was transferred into a beautiful poem...! !
    Well done my friend! ! (Report) Reply

  • Patti Masterman (6/1/2011 11:54:00 AM)

    This is such a lovely piece, it should have a flurry of commentary, but must content itself with my stamp of approval. First verse is legendary classy on the graduated cylinder of class. (Report) Reply

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