Ken e Hall

Rookie (Last Century / England-Now Australian Citizen)

*** Dancing In Flowers *** - Poem by Ken e Hall

You're dancing in flowers this lover's fair
I'm stepping on clouds floating on air,
Swinging on stars dreaming on cue
Sliding down rainbows nearer to you,

You hide behind daisies with buttercup class

Still peeking thru' locks of a golden haired lass,
A bunny falls back as you quickly dance by
As I float down from the super blue sky.

Ah, I see you soft an' so still in a beautiful pose
Smiling hiding in the folds of a rose,
For a kiss indeed I miss thorns so scary,
Inside the rose it's all in a day's work for the love
......................................... ....................
of a fairy.


Comments about *** Dancing In Flowers *** by Ken e Hall

  • Veteran Poet - 1,548 Points Dorothy- A. Holmes (5/6/2015 9:44:00 PM)

    A lovely verse, thank you for the smile!
    Dorothy
    A Poet Who Loves To Sing (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,794 Points Elena Sandu (5/2/2015 3:58:00 PM)

    How could I miss this gem? Inloved with your poem! Yes, the dance of beauty could make us walk on clouds. Hiding between daisies with buttercup class a wonderful choice of words, splendid imaagery, who would not love such richness! Thank you for sharing! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,848 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (4/17/2015 12:50:00 PM)

    Wow fantastic! I read more of yor poems today but this one was of the masterpieces! So imaginative and creative and makes readers soar with yor words and fly like fairies. Kudos! Great to read u again. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,167 Points Hazel Durham (2/25/2015 9:23:00 AM)

    Such a beautiful, charming poem with inspired lines that give a touch of magic to this truly delightful poem! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,557 Points Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. (2/8/2015 12:16:00 PM)

    Hello poet Ken. This was an absolutely charming poem, well done. Loyd Taylor (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,381 Points L. E. O. Gibraltar (1/21/2015 12:04:00 AM)

    A lovely poem! Beautiful imagery that allows the reader to see the love in the air. Loved it! Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 566 Points John Ugolo Umah (1/11/2015 2:09:00 PM)

    Wow! I applaud this sire, I so much love to be loved and this piece is just so wonderful, keep writing sire. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 419 Points Jeri Martindale (12/27/2014 3:02:00 PM)

    I knew she was a fairy! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Amanda Grube (11/25/2014 12:45:00 AM)

    love this one. it make think about everything happened to me (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 361 Points Shania K. Younce (10/18/2014 1:57:00 PM)

    This is truly a beautiful poem. Bien! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,479 Points Mihaela Pirjol (9/23/2014 4:52:00 AM)

    Such a sweet and romantic poem... with great rhythm and rhyme scheme. Lovely! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 427 Points Chris Zachariou (7/12/2014 6:35:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem. It takes me to another world where there is magic and wonder. And the sweetness of love, great. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,655 Points Valsa George (6/30/2014 5:37:00 AM)

    The dance and movements of this fairy are so delicate and sweet.....! I visualize her hiding and smiling in the folds of a rose..... Just lovely! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 37 Points Colleen Courtney (6/20/2014 6:32:00 AM)

    Oh! As a lover of fairies, unicorns and all things mystical and whimsical, I can't help but not fall in love with this poem! Had me enchanted from that wonderful first stanza! Have already added to my list of favorites! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 313 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (5/4/2014 3:32:00 AM)

    a very profound poem...writing at it's best! I loved this beautiful piece (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 166 Points Wang Qian (4/28/2014 7:59:00 AM)

    It's so touching and rhyming nicely! I also like the images inside. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jarea` Poet (10/3/2013 4:21:00 AM)

    very 'airy'... visuals with your pen.. nicely done.. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,095 Points Patricia Grantham (8/15/2013 8:14:00 PM)

    A very nice lilting poem. So daintily put in details that it
    makes me feel as if I was just a little girl singing the song
    ring-around-the rosy pockets full of posies. Beautifully
    written Ken (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mohabeer Beeharry (8/15/2013 7:58:00 AM)

    I like the imagery the poem invokes. Sweet and tentative. Good write.

    Mohabeer Beeharry (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,891 Points Heather Wilkins (6/19/2013 9:18:00 PM)

    lovely with nice imagery. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 1, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 29, 2015


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