The Elegy Of Me Poem by Enchanting Owl

The Elegy Of Me

Rating: 5.0

Viewing the skyline with stars; seeing the ocean so blue.
Hearing the cute birds sing; witnessing a bud sprout, and new.
I will foster this majestic and winsome view until February,
This could be the elegy for me.

Tears are my wine; the bullets of misery ricochet.
This is customary; this is my favorite entree.
Familiar with this never-ending cycle of melancholy,
This would be the elegy for me.

Dialogue is my acceptance; pleasing is my 'Thank You! '.
For the people who extended their hands, wearing my shoe,
Want to see them happy authentically and smiling endlessly.
This might be the elegy for me.

Escaping reality, flying in dreamed ecstasy.
My way of escaping worry and it feels so easy.
Unvigilant, uncharted and unfamiliar with what may cause me,
This should be the elegy for me.

Stepping into huge traps and falling on an untouched chasm.
Depression is my new bible, girdled with hollow phantasm.
Lightning strikes flash unwanted glum memories—the great absence of glee.
This must be the elegy for me.

Sunset viewing... cruel summer... tears drop...feeling in love...
Thanking people, self-acceptance, a sky full of doves.
The tangent line of emotion is showing—this is my synecdoche.
This had been an elegy for me.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
These are the things I would like to hear at my funeral. I want my friends and loved ones to tell me that I was able to fulfill the bullets inside this poem. I was able to see and experience life to the fullest.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
CJ DG 05 September 2023

the best synecdoche indeed

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S December 07 September 2023

the more i read your poem, the more i become curious and enchanted

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S S 07 September 2023

wow, i love this, this is catchy and creatively made

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Acir Eryat 07 September 2023

How I wish I can make my own elegy, love this

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M H 05 September 2023

I enjoyed reading this, a solid 5

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Julrick Verallo 05 September 2023

this is a masterpiece!

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