Revisit, Rekindle, And Reconnect Poem by Enchanting Owl

Revisit, Rekindle, And Reconnect

Rating: 5.0

Eleven moons ago, my heart was drenched in blue.
Presently, sitting here on the bench, I can see through.
The place we used to love, with the clouds running like deer.
The place we used to visit, with the wind blowing at the rear.

Staring at the stars we used to draw our future,
The patterns are now chaotic; all are in full suture.
Without you, I'm a ship without a navigator.
Lifeless, motionless—like a patient to an amputator.

As the clock turned backward, my soul reached the fierce sun.
Trying to touch its warmth and trying to feel undone.
I miss the gentle caress and the secure embrace.
You're my sun; unquestionably, you're my saving grace.

Silhouettes pass by, and I'm covered with shadows.
As I look up and see your pair of eyes, my heart knows.
After all the waiting, you stand there with sweet flowers.
You are ready to reconnect, and I'd say this time is ours.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem focuses on the emotions of waiting and revisiting old love. It entails how excruciating it is to wait for someone, how painful it is to see things and places you both love, how taxing it is to look forward to an unknown future, and how anxiety affects your well-being. How I wish we were all the same with the ending in this poem—the person we waited for came back and chose us this time.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S S 08 September 2023

'You're my sun; unquestionably, you're my saving grace.' this line is so true, i connect ti this

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M H 09 September 2023

This is not for me. Waiting for someone who are so unsure, but nice poem though

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Julrick Verallo 09 September 2023

I admire your ability to wait that long. Waiting is not an assurance, the other person can never have a courage to go back.

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CJ DG 09 September 2023

'Lifeless, motionless—like a patient to an amputator.' always like this, all kind if 'less'

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Acir Eryat 08 September 2023

thanks for posting this

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S December 08 September 2023

wow, your power to wait is very admirable

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