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Little King of Sorrows


The Edge


My troubled soul has reached the edge...I'm shaking at the knees...the power my heart has over my mind is terrifying. Ambushes of unstable thoughts surround me. I lock myself inside my notebook.
Primal instincts could sway me harm.
My intuition is suspect at best.
A distant whisper calling. The little things. They keep me breath.
Frozen. Paralysed by the unknown.
Hindered by my collection of failed endevors... the next could do me in.
What is right?
I've prayed at every crossroad reached...
to find this edge again.

Submitted: Wednesday, March 27, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, March 27, 2013
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Not alot of time for thinking lately. jotted this down a couple days ago. maybe not poem worthy, but whatever. I know the difference of what im capable of when given time. But when standing on the edge...

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  • Little King Of Sorrows (3/27/2013 1:41:00 AM)

    Thank you my dear friend. I keep your spirit with me wherever I go. Though time and space between us, this one thing always know. (Report) Reply

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