The Clouds And You Poem by Morose Mermaid

The Clouds And You

Rating: 3.0


The clouds and you

All the dark clouds of mind are gathered in the sky,
Is it for you or not I don't know
Now a days its raining a lot
Not from the sky though.

If God had given me the power or
If I had a magic lamp with Jeanie
Then I would have asked to become the drop of sweat on your forehead
Coz it was born there and will die on your heated lips,
Touching down your cheek....

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Ask me about it I will tell you.. translation of my very first poem 'Megh r Tumi' (মেঘ আর তুমি)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 30 November 2013

It's a beautiful, romantic poem. An epitaph of the dried, buried drop of sweat could be: ' I lie here in warmth, In your softness, In your touch, In your wants.'

1 3 Reply
Muhammad Ali 29 November 2013

a nice poem of love dear. good work. deep emotions and too light to read.

1 2 Reply
Khairul Ahsan 26 November 2013

This is a beautiful poem. 'Now a days its raining a lot Not from the sky though.' A good expression.

1 2 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success