A Mermaid's Tale Of Concrete's World Poem by Morose Mermaid

A Mermaid's Tale Of Concrete's World

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A Mermaid's Tale of Concrete's World

I am watching the sea from this concrete's world;
Turquoise blue happy waves;
Grey unhappy waves;
Green lost waves;
Black waves which shows Poseidon's anger;
Little waves;
Big waves.

All the waves are confined in this world of concrete;
The sea is enormous, it is prodigious;
What is sea? Is it he or she?
Why can I not embrace thee? ?
Why I feel so numb when I am near thy immensity;
though I love thee alike Tithonus's love for Aurora?

Am I being punished by the Lord of Sea?
Is it for imprisoning you in this concrete world?

Then hey Lord let me be free...
Let me embrace the Sea..
Let me go inside you and
Let me be blend and united with you and
Let me compliment you with my untouched beauty...

A Mermaid's Tale Of Concrete's World
Sunday, December 1, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: sea
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dedicate in devotion to Sea...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lucifera Santez 02 December 2013

wow, unique and imaginative. loved it. please read some of my poems and comment. :)

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Adeeb Alfateh 26 June 2019

Am I being punished by the Lord of Sea? Is it for imprisoning you in this concrete world? good; impressive expression good 10+++++++++++++

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Kanav Justa 02 December 2013

.. really liked the last stanja a lot.... keep up ...

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Khairul Ahsan 02 December 2013

This is a nice tribute to a sea. Sea waves have been metaphorically compared to different colors and dimensions. 'Let me compliment you with my untouched beauty... ' This is a very warm compliment!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 02 December 2013

Wow fantasy imaginations poem. Written superbly. I lov watchin waves too. Do read my latest poem too.

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Poet's Fan 02 December 2013

seems the mermaid is now feeling like a fish out of water........on a concrete jungle......

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