The Changing World Poem by NEETHA SASIDHARAN

The Changing World

Rating: 3.5


Without tensions,
without worries,
it lay under the ground
as if in a mom's womb.

One sunny morn,
peeped out as a sapling.
Had a good glimpse of
the green around him.

When it grew, ofcourse
changes were there within it.
But was it fair for it's
sorroundings to change? ? ?

Now it is standing there
not with tender leaves
not with the green around it,
but with the barren land...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amit Gunji 20 November 2011

Wow! Awesome! Good comparison! Loved d poem

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Kanav Justa 17 January 2013

your poems are so deep, , , , , , respect for this one, , , , will read this one again, , , ,

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Sajna Kailas 20 January 2012

amazingly written piece Neetha! ! ! ! ! loved it a lot! nice comparisons and structure. keep it up yar! ! ! !

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Neetha Sasidharan 01 January 2012

thanku sooooo muuuch 4 ur nice comments.. also, feel free to write to me if there is any corrections in my poems...

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Rekha Mandagere 31 December 2011

Awesome Neetha. I love your young feelings for nature. Keep writing :) Marks 10+++++++

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Vipins Puthooran 29 December 2011

Wow, I adore this talent! ! ! A great poem! ! ! An elegant penning! ! ! 10

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