The Car Moved Ahead Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

The Car Moved Ahead

Rating: 4.8


The car moved ahead
At its steady pace
One meter in front of the other

It is amazing to know
How Pierre can survive for so many years
In the middle of uncertainty if it was love or hate

The sky had begun to threaten
Very early in the morning
And the rain was pouring so strange

(dedicated to a great poet, Mark Strand)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Obinna Eruchie 26 September 2009

Despite the rain storming ahead, 'The car moved ahead'. Wonderful.

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Merna Ibrahim 01 October 2009

Nice poem and title as well! ! keep it up...Merna

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Catrina Heart 29 September 2009

wow what a wonderful poem made...well done!

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Omar Ibrahim 29 September 2009

good work my friend thanks for sharing your poems with us.....10+

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Juan Carlos Abeti 28 September 2009

very desciptive, good job.

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Marieta Maglas 26 September 2009

wonderful narrative poem, thank you for sharing....10+

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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