The Blind Couple And The Close Minded Man Poem by louis rams

The Blind Couple And The Close Minded Man

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a couple born blind at birth, decided that they would marry
and a child they wanted to carry.
when an acquaintance of a friend
began to question such an affair.
he had to question them, he did not care.

how can you marry one another?
when you can't even see each other?
how do you know if your partner
is a beauty or a beast?
and any children that you have
may come out the same as you.
living in darkness, is that what you
want for them too?

the blind couple holding hands, and smiles
on their faces, walked over to him.
the woman asked if she could touch him?
and he agreed.
she touched the features of his face
his hair, his shoulders, and leaned
over and inhaled deeply.

she stepped back, and in a soft gentle voice said:
you are a man 5'11' in height
but you have no clue- no insight.
by your features of your face
your looks are quite fine
your face narrows down to your chin
telling me you are slim.

the mark on the bridge of your nose
tells me that you wear glasses too.

the smell from your body, tells me that
you are a nervous person, and always on the move.
and the way you dress, makes you think
you're in the groove.

'shocked and dismayed, he did'nt know what to say'

she then said in that same tone.
because we are blind from our birth
does not mean we can not see.
we live in darkness, but love lights up our hearts.
and the other senses, we had from the start.

we do everything the same as you
and some things, we may do better too.

we dress ourselves, bathe, cook, clean the house too
and we know just what to do.
as for a child coming into our lives
and if the child will live in darkness
the same as us.
in GOD we put our trust.

embarassed and apologetic, he learned
a lesson that day.
LOVE AND FAITH, have no boundaries
and there is nothing that can not be overcome.
if you trust in the FATHERS SON.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 27 September 2009

an excellent narration sir....very true they are blessed with love and on god they can put their trust....10

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Shashendra Amalshan 07 October 2009

Hello sir! ! ! ! ! I think this is one of your best poems up-to-date. I mean, I loved the story.. And also liked the message it gave me. Hey I am so nervous these days, any one with right senses can see I am a rattled person lolss.. Anyway I really did enjoyed this poem. Wonderful.. Sorry took me time to respond to your mail..10++++ Regards Shan

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Kranthi Pothineni 06 October 2009

Sir, this piece of your is really beautiful. There is no need of talking about your narration skills. But in this piece you had given a beautiful and wonderful message too. Really loved this one a lot. Wish to see more like this from you.10

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Christine Kerr 30 September 2009

I love this, I've had a deaf friend since I was a little girl and have met many more since then. It is unbelievable how many people out there don't wan't to be bothered with them. From what I know, what they don't hear in the world is made up in their happy gentle nature. Yes their life is different then ours but you can always learn something that you never knew before, if you just give them the time.

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this is poem is wonderful.. i agree.. AMEN AMEN AMEN!

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Carol Gall 27 September 2009

excellent louis a lesson learned 10

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