The Beautiful Dream Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

The Beautiful Dream

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The beautiful dream
Wednesday,2nd October 2019

I feel pain
but remain
with your wits
and greet it with joy

it means so many things
and try to bring
some joy in our approach
and feel happy as such

I had to fall in line
and define
the goal in a simple manner
and live with peace here

we had knitted a beautiful dream
to function as a good team
live in with harmony and peace
life was to be spent with an ease

the days may pass
with its own class
showing no error or misses
as we had promises to keep

life is not clearly visualized
but utilized
in the best possible way
and go away with fruits of it

Hasmukh Mehta
Courtesy: RAVEN TOTEM 2

The Beautiful Dream
Wednesday, October 2, 2019
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 02 October 2019

A very thought provoking poem, IF I may say, but truly and sweetly rendered. In realizing a good ans happy life in society there must never be any difference in class form, whatever you have written an excellent poem in end rhyming and content. A 10 Full Score, Hasmukh Sir!

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m overwhelmed at the response dear

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 October 2019

On approach we get some joy and sometimes we feel pain. But we do not bother about. We should proceed ahead with great dream and vision. An excellent poem is very well penned.10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 October 2019

life is not clearly visualized but utilized in the best possible way and go away with fruits of it Hasmukh Mehta Courtesy: RAVEN TOTEM 2 .poemhunter/has, ilj-amathalal/

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