Tempos Reaching My Soul Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Tempos Reaching My Soul

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Drumming to the beat of my heart fills the atmosphere
within my mind, titillating and exciting it no end,
finding tempos reaching within my soul.

Touching spiritually with it's essence and totality,
beautiful and enchanting, mysteriously filling me with
emotion and tantalizing feelings.

Traversing rapidly down paths of enlightenment and
through one dimension after another, pleasantly.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 27 August 2016

This is a poem about mastery. And that is a very positive word, with only good connotations regarding a life spent in art. You have the image of the journey as the backbone of this poem, but I sense you already have reached the soul-level in your life, so the destination of your journey is undergoing a transformation. You can already incorporate soul-energy as you move toward whatever is looming ahead. Appropriately these recent poems contains images of speeding up since the destination is so vlose.

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Paul Amrod 18 August 2016

Hi RoseAnn, As a musician I appreciate your reference to rhythm and bringing in your text to the culmination of Enlightment, I engage myself with my writing in spirtual aspects of our existence. I invite you as well to read my poetry if you wish. It would be for me an honor. Greetings, Paul

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 August 2016

Drumming to the beat of my heart fills the atmosphere within my mind on reading such an interesting and excellently composed poem. Really very nice and pleasing effect this gives. Nice sharing....10

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