Insight Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Insight

Rating: 4.8


Leaves, branches, trees waving good-bye to me
and playing a beautiful symphony with the
gentle breeze.

It touches my soul and draws me nearer to
heaven and God.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
An Observation:

Shells peacefully hanging,
swaying to the rhythm of
unseen air.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 22 August 2015

playing a beautiful symphony with the gentle breeze. fine poetic expression. thank you Roseann for letting me read it. thank you

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Aisha Rehman 27 August 2015

Thank you so much RoseAnn for such a nice compliments.I am touched by your words. Thank you once again. And All the Best for your poetry.

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Hazel Durham 06 September 2015

Beautiful write with your insight like part of nature as it draws you close to God!

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Mary Mc Creath 24 September 2015

I enjoyed your musing and the words that came from it. They touched me.

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Kenneth Maswabi 19 January 2016

The little things in nature carries an enormous spiritual load. You have captured your experience very well. Thank you.

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Rob Lamberton 07 December 2022

Leaves, branches, trees wave hello to me but with the same effect…drawing me closer to heaven and God.

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East Sea Fairy East Sea Fairy 29 September 2020

what a poetic picture you draw with words! great imagination

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Carola Hume 12 February 2019

simple and very touching! ! thank you roseann.

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Beth Jamison 09 February 2019

So descriptive and visual in my mind. Feels like I’m there.

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 May 2016

my dear poetess Rose ann how nature brings your being to the Almighty..... so nice dear Roseann

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