RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Gold Star - 19,834 Points (October 6,1950 / New Jersey)

Insight - Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Leaves, branches, trees waving good-bye to me
and playing a beautiful symphony with the
gentle breeze.
It touches my soul and draws me nearer to
heaven and God.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

An Observation:

Shells peacefully hanging,
swaying to the rhythm of
unseen air.

Comments about Insight by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

  • Gold Star - 13,308 Points Ramesh Rai (5/23/2015 5:18:00 AM)

    Beautiful loved your emotions and thoughts. Regards. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,894 Points Daniel Brick (5/5/2015 1:44:00 PM)

    It's amazing how close to where we are on earth heaven is when your mind is clear, your heart is light, and your soul is welcoming. You don't even need a celestial map. Just a prayerful poem. Your observation poem has that prayer-like quality of affirming belief based on faith - The gentle swaying is actually an invisible rhythm which means someone, an angel perhaps, is watching over things. Those are two wonderful beliefs - in the closeness of heaven and in a guardian watching over us. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 486 Points Sreelekha Premjit (1/20/2015 12:41:00 AM)

    I love the way you write and god bless you for being so prolific. You are an inspiration, truly! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 486 Points Sreelekha Premjit (1/20/2015 12:40:00 AM)

    I love the way you write and god bless you for being so prolific. You are an inspiration, truly! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,398 Points Amitava Sur (6/13/2014 7:28:00 AM)

    A very own poetical perception as viewed by the individual. As here in this way by the poet.

    Another view - - - -

    Again in the same situation another person will think as if along with the breeze the leaves, branches and the trees are bowing in a symphony to welcome the person in this earth to be with them.
    But in either way this is lovely to imagine (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 24, 2013



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