ramesh rai

Gold Star - 15,269 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Template - Poem by ramesh rai

If the template of my life
curves towards direction of wind
blows it to an unknown destination
shakles all humours of life
life is filled with primordiality
shabbiness of life is aroused
funk of life is implated
purpresture of agony ammerce the life
my submission to the Lord
will sail me across the desert land


Comments about Template by ramesh rai

  • Gold Star - 7,692 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/7/2013 7:46:00 PM)

    Sail across the desert in the ship of the desert. Beautiful. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (9/7/2013 2:09:00 PM)

    subjection to the lord will take care of everything. nice (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,269 Points Ramesh Rai (9/7/2013 1:02:00 PM)

    incidently it took seven times n every it was showing w v c. finally i posted against some of your poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/7/2013 11:24:00 AM)

    Wonderful write..It's very true said, just a twist of wind, everything changes in life...Loved reading it.

    In my Biography Sir,

    Thank you Ramesh Sir, I am really surprised whether these comments are for me. I feel I am just an ordinary person. I know my poems are not up to that standard which it should be. Because I have seen many beautiful and standard poems form PH itself as well as from you itself. I am not sure whether I will reach the level of international poets. Thank you for the beautiful compliments. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 18 Points Shraddha The Poetess (9/7/2013 6:55:00 AM)

    wonderful poem sir............
    i invite u to read my new post..'meri prchhai aksar mukjhse poochha krti hai' hope u'll like it sir (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 9, 2013


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