ramesh rai

Gold Star - 11,237 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Template


If the template of my life
curves towards direction of wind
blows it to an unknown destination
shakles all humours of life
life is filled with primordiality
shabbiness of life is aroused
funk of life is implated
purpresture of agony ammerce the life
my submission to the Lord
will sail me across the desert land

Submitted: Saturday, September 07, 2013
Edited: Monday, September 09, 2013

Form:


Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (Template by ramesh rai )

Enter the verification code :

  • Gold Star - 11,237 Points Ramesh Rai (9/7/2013 1:02:00 PM)

    incidently it took seven times n every it was showing w v c. finally i posted against some of your poem. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,865 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/7/2013 11:24:00 AM)

    Wonderful write..It's very true said, just a twist of wind, everything changes in life...Loved reading it.

    In my Biography Sir,

    Thank you Ramesh Sir, I am really surprised whether these comments are for me. I feel I am just an ordinary person. I know my poems are not up to that standard which it should be. Because I have seen many beautiful and standard poems form PH itself as well as from you itself. I am not sure whether I will reach the level of international poets. Thank you for the beautiful compliments. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Shraddha The Poetess (9/7/2013 6:55:00 AM)

    wonderful poem sir............
    i invite u to read my new post..'meri prchhai aksar mukjhse poochha krti hai' hope u'll like it sir (Report) Reply

Read all 5 comments »

Trending Poets

Trending Poems

  1. Dreams, Langston Hughes
  2. As I Grew Older, Langston Hughes
  3. Mother to Son, Langston Hughes
  4. I, Too, Langston Hughes
  5. I Dream A World, Langston Hughes
  6. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  7. Let America be America Again, Langston Hughes
  8. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  9. If, Rudyard Kipling
  10. April Rain Song, Langston Hughes

Poem of the Day

THE CHANCELLOR mused as he nibbled his pen
(Sure no Minister ever looked wiser),
And said, “I can summon a million of men
To fight for their country and Kaiser;

...... Read complete »

   

Member Poem

New Poems

  1. Listening to the radio in the Afternoon, Angell Afinowi
  2. We Want Democracy, Now., Norman Jin Shyr Wang
  3. Cantus lacrimosus, Angell Afinowi
  4. Rest My Dear, Michael P. McParland
  5. Life's like a compote of the desserts, Mark Heathcote
  6. I fade away into the light, Anu Shraddha
  7. Neo-Classic Tasweer/Hindi/Urdu, Aftab Alam
  8. The awkward Moment, Angell Afinowi
  9. Loo Prints, Phil Soar
  10. Listen, Mariam de Haan
[Hata Bildir]