Tanka ~ A Journey Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka ~ A Journey

Rating: 5.0


moments undefined
if we choose judiciously
life will sail smoothly
with flow of river water
to ocean with no return

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 02 August 2021

Dilectable Tanka about Journey with no return. Sparkling thought!

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Michael Jack 02 August 2021

Yes it is the journey of this life. Lived just once.

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Shreya Hacks 02 August 2021

Yes its a one way trafic with no return.

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S H 03 August 2021

Astounding! ! ! ! Just brilliant

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Varsha M 03 August 2021

Yes judicious calls is the need of the hour snd we need to abide to not return back.

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Jamami Nakatu 03 August 2021

Life's journey in tanka is lucid and stylish.

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 02 August 2021

Moments remains undefined hence we need to choose judiciously every step in life if we want to sail smoothly with flow of river water to ocean...Gr8.

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Deepak S S 02 August 2021

Class tanka to say the least.

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