A Wonderland Poem by M. Asim Nehal

A Wonderland

Rating: 4.8


All roses no thorns,
come to this wonderland
fragrance everywhere,
blue sky wears silky clouds
Silver lining on golden rays,
the chimes ringing everywhere
An ideal place for body and soul

Where mind is fearless and heart is bubbling....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bulbul Khanna 10 November 2018

Silver lining on golden rays, the chimes ringing everywhere An ideal place for body and soul .

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M Asim Nehal 13 March 2019

Thx Much Bulbul K

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Umtiti p 10 November 2018

Is this place exists in reality or just an imagnation Whatever i liked it .

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M Asim Nehal 13 March 2019

Thx Much Umtiti.

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Sandra Feldman 22 November 2023

Also thank you so much for reading mine and for all your incomparable comments. Very appreciated..

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Sandra Feldman 22 November 2023

Full of beauty, and fragrance and hope.'An ideal pace for body and soul' Wonderful poem!

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Sabahat Batool 29 May 2023

All roses, no thorns_ this wonderland must be somewhere in the world of imagination or it is our lost world, the Eden

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 January 2023

CONGRATULATIONS for the TMPOTD, Dr. M. Asim Sir! Most deserving Wonderland, All Stars from the Galaxy. Your TMPOTD was on the 7th Sep 2018. This has become a gem and is immortal now. My greatest compliments for thee.

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M. Asim Nehal 23 January 2023

Thank you so much for your heartfelt appreciation, Madam Sylvia...

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Anjandev Roy 19 March 2022

Superb piece....thank u, dear friend...

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