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Suna hay... (Urdu) ! ! !

Suna tha ik nai taqdeer
ki tashkeel honi hay
Suna tha ab k aangan ki faza
tabdeel honi hay

Suna tha aasman se adl ki
zanjeer latkay gi
Suna tha her pareshan haal ki
taqdeer chamkay gi

Suna tha aashti k mehrbaan
baadal jo barsen gay
Masaiyl sir chhupaanay ki jagah
lene ko tarsen ge

Suno! hay ab kahan her waqt
jaadu ki chhari chalti
Suna hay chund barson me
koi mushkil nhi talti

Suna hay sabr ka daaman
abhi thaamay hi rehna hay
Suna hay jis k aadi hen
ussi mushkil ko sehna hay

Abhi ummeed na baandho
abhi mushkil me rehna hay
Suna hay apna ghar abb bhi
andheron me hi rehna hay

Yateemon ki tarha thehro,
hareefon ki hukoomat hay
Pareshani ki nobat kiya,
shareefon ki hukoomat hay

Khabar gardish me he wo hi
puraanay baaghban hon ge
Suna hay phir wo hi chehray
hamaray hukmaran hon gay!

Submitted: Tuesday, June 04, 2013
Edited: Friday, August 02, 2013


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On socio-political scene after elections!

Comments about this poem (Aao baaten karen! (Urdu) by Shahzia Batool )

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  • Shahzia Batool (1/7/2014 11:11:00 PM)

    i thank all the respected poets for commenting and creating their own lines here....this fact embellished the poem!

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  • Muhammad Ali (1/7/2014 11:22:00 AM)

    suna hay, raah ka, aakhir
    wo sang e meel hota hy.
    suna hay, aadmi andr sy
    jb tabdeel hota hy.
    ...
    likha hay, mushkilen jo hen
    ye sb aazmayish hy.
    likha hay, dolat kadon me
    hm hi jeson ki rehayish hy.
    ...
    suna hay, aadam mitti tha
    milay ga aakhir mitti me.
    parho! k ik khazana hy
    Jibrayil ki chitthi me.
    ...
    Aapi, ap ki poem ny itna hasaas kia k ye lines rawaan ho gyi.

  • Neela Nath (6/14/2013 10:39:00 AM)

    Shahzia, pata chal gayaki P.H me ek, roshni hay, aur wo hai up....Bohut achchha laga.I'm feeling great, upka khasiyat dekhke.

  • Ramesh Rai (6/12/2013 1:44:00 PM)

    Suna hay sabr ka daaman
    abhi thaamay hi rehna hay
    Suna hay jis k aadi hen
    ussi mushkil ko sehna hay

  • Passionate Reader (6/11/2013 4:11:00 AM)

    This poem exclusively presents the diversity in your poetry. There is always a message in your poems and your urdu poems have greatly elevated my interest in urdu poetry. Loved reading this poem. It’s simply great! ! ! ! ! ! :)

  • Irum . (6/7/2013 1:01:00 AM)

    Amazing! I am moved

  • R.k Das (6/6/2013 1:58:00 AM)

    how i wish i knew Urdu, , the most poetic off all languages, , i tried my best to understand in my limited way, , , lovely poem from a brilliantly talented poet and critic and academician, :) thanx

  • Farah Ilyas (6/5/2013 1:28:00 PM)

    Ha ha as usual old wine in new glass, horrendous callous veracity to be presented magnificently...10/10

  • Sun Shine (6/5/2013 12:43:00 PM)

    sahir ludhyanvi, faiz ahmed faiz, ahmed faraz, ahmed nadeem qasmi aur habib jalib k bad khoobsoorat behar aur be-panah shairiyat liye huay istahron k sath fuedalism k khilaf aik khoobsorat nazam likhi hai! !

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/5/2013 8:18:00 AM)

    You brought out the beauty of Urdu language in this poem. You say 'I heard that...' and bring reality (haqiqat) beautifully. Thank you.

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