Md. Asadullah

Silver Star - 3,716 Points (11th july)

Sun, Moon And My Imagination - Poem by Md. Asadullah

I saw bright sun with blazing shine.
Its behaviour, demeanor masculine.
Armoured like some ancient knight.
Protector of his queen, ready to fight.

I saw shy moon with soothing shine.
Its behaviour, demeanor feminine.
Charms hiding 'tween clouds at night.
As if longing for some armoured knight.

Now think if moon becomes sun.
No night, dreams or romance, none;
Or else entire world needs to turn gay.
What do you think, what do you say?


Comments about Sun, Moon And My Imagination by Md. Asadullah

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (3/28/2014 8:35:00 AM)

    It flows like a brook formed by the spring from the high mountain lovely (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 27,387 Points Valsa George (3/21/2014 7:14:00 AM)

    Your comparison of the sun to an armoured knight and moon to a shy maiden hiding her charms and longing for an armoured knight is very imaginative and quite apt! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 19, 2014

Poem Edited: Sunday, April 20, 2014


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