Md. Asadullah

Veteran Poet - 3,575 Points (11th july)

Sun, Moon And My Imagination


I saw bright sun with blazing shine.
Its behaviour, demeanor masculine.
Armoured like some ancient knight.
Protector of his queen, ready to fight.

I saw shy moon with soothing shine.
Its behaviour, demeanor feminine.
Charms hiding 'tween clouds at night.
As if longing for some armoured knight.

Now think if moon becomes sun.
No night, dreams or romance, none;
Or else entire world needs to turn gay.
What do you think, what do you say?

Submitted: Wednesday, March 19, 2014
Edited: Sunday, April 20, 2014

Topic of this poem: imagination


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  • Gold Star - 37,072 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (3/28/2014 8:35:00 AM)

    It flows like a brook formed by the spring from the high mountain lovely (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,093 Points Valsa George (3/21/2014 7:14:00 AM)

    Your comparison of the sun to an armoured knight and moon to a shy maiden hiding her charms and longing for an armoured knight is very imaginative and quite apt! ! (Report) Reply

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