Christopher Leone

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Stay With Me My Angel - Poem by Christopher Leone

stay with me my angel
i need you now and again
stay with me my angel
you know your my only friend
stay with me my angel
i need your light to live
stay with me my angel
your the only one to forgive
stay with me my angel
to take the pains away
stay with me my angel
in bed is where i pray

dont go away my angel
i need you oh so much
dont go away my angel
i need a gentel touch
dont go away my angel
please take the sins away
dont go away my angel
i cannot last another day
dont go away my angel
i dont want another tear
dont go away my angel
take away all i have to fear

Comments about Stay With Me My Angel by Christopher Leone

  • Rookie - 164 Points Kasey Jessie (5/15/2014 8:12:00 AM)

    awwwwwwwwwwww its so beautiful (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 73 Points Jodie Hardy (8/26/2013 4:34:00 AM)

    Lovely poem, I think it is beautiful Jo x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tiny Dancer (2/3/2009 10:54:00 AM)

    This is good. I like it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kt Reynolds (6/5/2008 9:57:00 PM)

    Not bad...I love how you sounded in this poem. You have so much emotion in your words that they could come up and slap you in the face, good job on showing how you feel. But could you use more capitals? Sorry but it's like one of my pet peeves I might use too many capitals
    Good write! ! !
    With all the love and hate I have to offer- JH (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ashley Burnam (5/30/2008 11:57:00 PM)

    It has some good points here and there. Im not much for love poems but this some is simple and I'll admit sweet. Keep up the good work, and think about the flow of the worlds next time.7 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Candice Anderson (5/29/2008 2:43:00 PM)

    Thats an amazing poem chris. I love it. you are an amazing writer! Keep up the great work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Serenity Prayer (5/29/2008 2:21:00 PM)

    aww. its really cute and sweet. i like it alot. i give it a 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Clarissa Tobey (5/29/2008 8:31:00 AM)

    Chris the angel shall not leave and if it dose you can talk with me (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,590 Points Sadiqullah Khan (5/29/2008 12:10:00 AM)

    waav, , fine rythm in your lines, , , surely the angel will stay, , , , keep going chris (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 29, 2008

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