My Love For You Poem by Christopher Leone

My Love For You

Rating: 4.3


the love i have for you
is from a wish one day set true
from that smile on your face
to the precious look in your eyes
from the softness of your touch,
to the melody in your cries
i want to be that one, at the end of everyday
to tell you that i love you, and that ill never go away

i want to be your second heart
your first love, your last kiss
all around your world, i want to be
with together engraved in our hearts
solid as stone, left untouched
spirits longing forever, as married themselves
ill be yours truely, as would stated in writing
ill love you forever, my baby youll be

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bobbie Jo ..... 28 May 2008

for a young poet u say u are...depends how young or whateva...this is good..

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Serenity Prayer 28 May 2008

i love this one. im adding it to my favorites! ! !

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Seema Chowdhury 28 May 2008

wow a good love poem. i hope the person you wrote this for has read it.

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Jacqueline Rivera 04 June 2008

wow this is a nice poem. it talks about how you really feel for that person and how much you value them. i just never tought a boy could write such a beautiful poem.

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Ashley Burnam 30 May 2008

Its okay. In the second stanza the third and forthy line dont go well with each other but other than that there is no fault.8

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Tyease Collins 30 May 2008

This is the best romantic song ever. It's so full of love that's just so strong. I really love this poem...I wish I was the girl lol **Tyease**

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Myra Robertson 30 May 2008

all i could really say was wow

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Clarissa Tobey 29 May 2008

wow my mind is blowen away this is so sweet. the one you love must love you dearly theses poems are just so sweet

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