Broken Heart Poem by Christopher Leone

Broken Heart

Rating: 4.5


At night i feel the coldness, breathing down my spine
It didnt happen like a bullet, it happened over time
Slowly coming and going, it suddenly only went
like a heart at fault, it hurt, cracked, and bent

the days went and nothing grew stronger
except the feeling in my heart, that i cared for no longer
from the past stays the past, and the future brings mysteries
my body feels unsure, that whats to come is in scarcity

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Chowdhury 28 May 2008

ooh no don't feel cracked and bent, life has ups anddownd. just learn to face them all and BE STRONG! !

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Clarissa Tobey 29 May 2008

sometimes you just need to talk and cry it out and say all the good and bad about the relationship

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 06 June 2008

O yes, relationships can leave you that way. Good read my friend. Please check our my poem 'One Again' Blessings, Loyd

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Tyease Collins 30 May 2008

I definately know that feeling...like your love for that person just fades away... Nice poem... **Tyease**

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james w foulk 30 May 2008

a very good poem and i know the feeling, write on

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Stacy Bea 29 May 2008

Chris your a very good poet, lovely poem

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wow u have a real talent for writting poems. good job. keep going Chris.

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