Spark Poem by Nikunj Sharma

Spark

Rating: 5.0


Tangible as a wish that comes from a heart true;
spirited as a dream that lives to come through; definite as tomorrow's sun; subtle as friendly fun.
Pleasing as a childish smile staying for a while; ephemeral as a fleeting moment; lively as a flowing current;
the spark of her eye; to live to stay to roam
Till the cows come home.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Nandy 29 July 2009

At times just a small 'spark' is adequate to light a raging fire! 10! -Raj Nandy

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Lynda Robson 29 July 2009

Hope the spark remains, lovely poem, thanks, 10 Lynda xx

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Marieta Maglas 29 July 2009

nice similes: ''Tangible as a wish that comes from a heart true; spirited as a dream that lives to come through'' embedded in this wonderful poem......10

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Lady Grace 29 July 2009

the sparks in her eyes are the light that lighten up the lonely sky the sparks of her love reflects in her eyes touches everybody's hearts, reaches one's dream..

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Braja K Sarkar 30 July 2009

....to live to stay to roam/till the cows come home...Good imagery.Thanks to the poet, you have touched the feelings of countrymen!

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 22 August 2009

some fine imagery....portraying an unforgettable pair of eyes... but when i see them, , , i see a slight sense of vulnerability, that surrenders them completely to you....trustfully.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 August 2009

verses given fine sparkle! 10+

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Christina Phan 09 August 2009

You are gd writer kept it up You are a such an inspiriation

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Siddharth Singh 09 August 2009

The sparkle in the eye together with the cow took me to the countryside. Deserves a 10.

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Obinna Eruchie 08 August 2009

You penned wondrously an expression vivid of her eyes with a '++spark++'.

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