Spoonerism Of My Life Poem by Nikunj Sharma

Spoonerism Of My Life

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Every morning, the bed wakes up
On me; in the room.
The tooth pastes the brush
Room cleans the broom

Car drives the driver
The road on its top
Its Tank fills the petrol pump
Where do I stop?

My face brightens the face cream
My eyes make the sunshine gleam
Am I giving life back to source?
Is this spoonerism a dream?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Hansford 29 June 2009

What an original idea, and so successful. The last line is a treasure.

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Sandra Martyres 29 June 2009

Great write...very original indeed

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Danny H 30 June 2009

the last 2 questions ending the poem, was very insightful. very plain in explaining ways of the human mind, well done

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Vaibhav Pandey 29 July 2009

nikunj ji isko toh padhke mazaa aa gaya....original ideas... very creative...I will take this to my fav....bravo! ! ! ! ! !

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Danny H 28 July 2009

Ive read this poem you recommended :) on 6/30 below see xD

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Subroto Chatterjee 22 July 2009

Nah. So wake up and smell the coffee. You've made it. Cheers. Subroto

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Yes, Nikunj i like this one - very clever! cxx

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Anjali Sinha 30 June 2009

wowwwwwwwww what a dream yeh it is spoonerism or is it robotism whatever nice ideas -10 anjali

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