Sounding Borewell Signals Poem by Indira Renganathan

Sounding Borewell Signals

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Good morning
On bicycles and 'bikes run
With kudams and buckets
On first-chore-water-hunting
Provoking heartfelt empathy

Yet water-hunting isn't much
Empathetic but feasting
Warblers squad signalled
Of sounding bore-well motor..
Overflowing overhead tank pouring..
Birds many round screeching
In gentle drinking harmony

Empathetic humans jostle..
Water-pumps and metro-water cabs
All by road-side screeching humanly
Sympathy or empathy is humans'
Yet apathy is...?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 16 October 2009

nice life-time imagery...the inclusion of birds in the poem canvas looks much meaningful...Thanneerukku Parakkiranga Thaye! good poem Indira...much asthetics inside it...10 Wish you a happy Diwali!

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Indira Babbellapati 02 October 2009

a typical scene in every town or metro...gearing up for water wars!

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Sandra Martyres 02 October 2009

A very timely piece Indira - well conceived, I agree with you our apathy towards the wastage of water in a year of drought is appalling...thanks for this write

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Seema Aarella 02 October 2009

the acitivity draws our attention, even my town faces scarcity of water.....a thoughtful write...thank u madam! !

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rago rago 02 October 2009

empathy apathy what ever it is.........we are the sufferers of scanty railfall and birds, animals too........it sounds as borewell signal.........

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