Thampi KEE

Freshman - 1,395 Points (1983-9-12 / kerala India)

Song of love


Heavens we never win the heavens
Heaven of love
They all flew not away from us

They may loved to sing here
The world where we live
The sins we fall on here


we cried for them to come here
Heavens to come to be here
We win the World where we live to come
They cried,
You might sing
But world where we live
You will dream not for me,
someone may dream for you
our dream is not the same.

Submitted: Monday, September 09, 2013
Edited: Monday, September 09, 2013

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Comments about this poem (Song of love by Thampi KEE )

  • Rookie - 194 Points Rose Lu (2/18/2014 9:31:00 PM)

    A lovely poem. I like it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,104 Points Valsa George (9/15/2013 11:38:00 PM)

    someone may dream for you
    our dream is not the same.

    It is sad! But a lovely poem Kee....! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/12/2013 7:55:00 AM)

    A good dedication..Loved the way you presented it. Poem with deep meaning in it. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,007 Points Unwritten Soul (9/10/2013 4:09:00 AM)

    A deep poem, at least to me....shall i play the heaven's harp to blow the sound of calming to your soul...could you see if i painted white in your darkest space in heart....dream may different but it came for same hope...a good hope and we wished to the same One..May He gives all the best for you...as you need and as all people want too...because song of love is for all who have life and love to fill_Soul (Report) Reply

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