Something Else Poem by Daniel Brick

Something Else

Rating: 4.7


Monday 15 May 2017

I woke up suddenly
at 5 am this morning,
rested, refreshed, ready
for the lovely day promised
by both the birds songs and
the clear pervasive sunlight.
It was a morning with no shadows,
a ulyssean dawn
shining with possibilities.
What was there not to hope for?

Bur something else happened...
I was not alert to the change:
I was still living inside
my expected day, unaware
of a shift that ran through
space and made time accept
a different outcome
from the beginning I had
witnessed, as I stood
on my balcony at dawn.

The sky darkened, The rain
fell around 1 pm, just enough
to spoil a family's picnic,
or make eager revelers disband.
We were sheltered from it, eating
our lunch, enjoying our conversation.
We deftly attuned ourselves to the day's
changing melody, perhaps singing new lyrics
to a familiar song we know by heart.
That's how we live, that's how we thrive...

But still the day had been
consecrated doe a different
purpose, a purpose shaped and
rehearsed in my mind, as I looked
into the early light from my balcony.
It was already half-lived
as I thought my way through
its natural wonders,
across its various places,
fully satisfied by its calm

and riot, those twin experiences
of Spring becoming Summer. That may
be a sufficient explanation. But I see
Ulysses striding the length of his
lone ship, exhorting his tired men,
'Stay true to your sworn purpose,
keep hope alive, and you will see
your Ithaca again! ' Did I surrender
too quickly in these latter days of ease?
Did I abandon the consecrated day
as if it were just an ordinary day?

Monday, May 15, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,journey
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Magdalena Biela 25 May 2017

Your poem may peacefully have an answer from Rose Milligan: Dust if you must Dust if you must, but wouldn’t it be better, to paint a picture or write a letter, bake a cake or plant a seed, ponder the difference between want and need? Dust if you must, but there’s not much time, with rivers to swim and mountains to climb, music to hear and books to read, friends to cherish and life to lead. Dust if you must, but the world’s out there With the sun in your eyes, the wind in your hair, A flutter of snow, a shower of rain. This day will not come around again. Dust if you must, but bear in mind, old age will come and it’s not kind. And when you go – and go you must – You, yourself, will make more dust! Rose Milligan

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Nosheen Irfan 19 May 2017

The beauty n hope each dawn brings with it is very soothing to the mind. But nature has its moods too. From a bright day, it does shift to dark gray overcast sky quite unexpectedly. But to take each day as a journey, to live through its wonders, to relish all it has to offer is what makes life worth-living. From spring to summer, the shift is quite natural and we need to adapt just as naturally. An optimistic poem. A huge 10.

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 May 2017

Life is the name of hope. Thanks

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