Song: Approaching Spring Poem by Daniel Brick

Thank you, Daniel! The story told by this poem is enchanting, scented, following the path of a child growing to be a girl and become a woman, every Spring! I hope that a child lives still inside every woman's heart, waiting secretly for the cranes, for the first blossoms, for the first kiss, for the first poem of love in Spring. Every Spring...Your poem is an icon of every child, girl, woman and I read it with a shhhh! Angels are talking! feeling in my heart. Blessed it be!

Deep feeling. Nicely envisioned. Good word choice. Many thanks.

Deep imagination. Very nicely envisioned. Good word choice. Many thanks.

Absolutely loved this poem, such a gentle, tender rhythm it has. The imagery is fantasttically alluring. My favorite lines are: To the sound of a deep melody, like the ancient circuit of the sea. help me to remember what has been loved and to dream of what is to be loved. To the sound of talk and tears like the softest tones of Chopin's piano. To the sounds of dawns and nightfalls like the boisterous orchestra of March. They deeply resonated within my mind, I noticed that several lines have to do with music. i.e. deep melody, sound, softest tones, Chopin's piano, boisterous orchestra. Chopin is my all time favorite! A very beautiful lilting poem, very enjoyable. Thank you, RoseAnn

A lovely write about the season. Can lift your spirits on the darkest of days.

A very warm and seasonal poem. Can lift your spirits on the darkest of days. Nice.

A lovely poem, Daniel. Thank you for sharing. Peace.

A great poem, and poetry, the type of poetry I've wanted to write in the past but never been able to. I salute you great poet.

There is music flowing poetical and smoothly throughout each verse in this poem; each stanza opens with a sound, and obviously I could not omit to notice the child, the little girl growing to become a woman. It is lovely to read a poem written in that beautiful old-fashion note!