Someone Stole The Moon Poem by Valerie Dohren

Someone Stole The Moon

Rating: 5.0


Someone stole the moon last night
Left the land bereft of light
Sorrow filled the sequinned sky
And all the stars began to cry

There above as glist'ning tears
(Weeping, weeping, no-one hears)
Flutt'ring down upon the world
Like soft confetti deftly hurled

Oh to see her face again
Then to watch her wax and wane
Lost to sight her Imbrian sea
So sweetly named Tranquility

Gone the night-time's wondrous glow
Tides no longer ebb and flow
Months shall cease and days decline
As now the moon no more will shine

Where is she, Oh where is she
She whose light shone down on me
Please return her to her place
Suspended in the frame of space

Set above and counting time
O'er the mountain tops to climb
Minute-hand upon the clock

- Tick tock, tick tock - tick tock, tick tock -

Wednesday, July 16, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
* Sunprincess * 16 July 2014

............ok everyone please remain calm....I am sending the FBI to investigate...I repeat please remain calm....they will get to the bottom of this case....do not worry!

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Who needs the moon when you have penned a poetic sun that shines even in the night! Sorry my friend you have no sympathy from me! 10/10

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Dinesan Madathil 19 July 2014

Someone stealing the Moon if he/she has not got a sky to put it on is blundering.... Your apprehension is a poetic notion that can leave all of us doomed to disaster.. I often wonder if one can steal our earth for a while! A fine poem, Val.

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Sandra Feldman 22 July 2014

Who done it? An Agatha Christie, Mystery, She's quite novels, Changed her name, And now writes, The most beautiful, Poetry!

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Shaun Cronick 26 November 2019

Valerie, in the words of the immortal Bette Davie form the classic film Now Voyager... " Oh Jerry, don't let's ask for the moon. We have the stars." A joy to read. And I thank you for writing and sharing magical poem. Loved It!

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Om Chawla 06 July 2015

Wonderful, wonderful poem! ! ! , Val. Loved it.

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Valerie Dohren 06 July 2015

Thank you Om. Pleased you liked it.

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Shahzia Batool 26 May 2015

Fertile imagination rhythmic creativity...nice as always!

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Indira Babbellapati 21 April 2015

lovely! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Achill Lad 12 September 2014

A lovely poem, so original. Flows wonderfully. (10)

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