Sometimes When I'M Dreaming Poem by Valerie Dohren

Sometimes When I'M Dreaming

Rating: 5.0


Sometimes, when I’m dreaming,
I feel you by my side
In the moonlight gleaming,
And when the sun has died.

I can hear you breathing,
Behold your gentle smile.
Know when you are leaving,
Then pray you’ll stay awhile.

For when you are near me
The world’s a sweeter place -
As I love you dearly,
Beyond all time and space.

And when I am dreaming
Your hand entwines with mine -
Ah, when I am dreaming,
The world is so divine.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Om Chawla 15 February 2014

Straight from the heart; 'Love beyond all time and space.' Very well written, Val.

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Anthony Burkett 16 February 2014

Beautiful sentiment... lovely in its essence of dream-like softness... wonderfully composed... beautifully penned.

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Amitava Sur 17 February 2014

A beautiful imagery consoling the soul... so nice so soothing, only love can give. You may read my poem I miss that gift.

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Dave Walker 17 February 2014

A very beautiful poem, sometimes the dream world can seem like the better world.

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Paul Reed 17 February 2014

In the moonlight gleaming and when the sun has died... simple but great line

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Weldon Davis 18 January 2016

This poem is romantic and eloquent...Loved it :)

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Meena Mustafa 26 February 2014

Beautifully expressed! just loved it. Thanks for sharing.

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Juan Olivarez 25 February 2014

Absolutely beautiful Val. Be well dear.

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Thomas Vaughan Jones 21 February 2014

Beautifully written Val. Tender emotions presented with your usual perfect syncopation. This poem is a rose among thorns, a lonely little petunia in an onion patch.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 February 2014

When dreaming, the world is divine. Beautiful poem.

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