...Some Inconsistent Thoughts Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni
...Some Inconsistent Thoughts
the blue tinge,
of the fallen petal,
seized by the ambience,
gathers in the vastness
of the infinite sky.
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draped in words,
a thought forms poetry,
disrobed,
a consciousness.
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a breath
conspires with stardust,
to produce galaxies.
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an age-old slumber,
withdraws its essence,
in one lightning,
and rumbles across
the endless ocean.
the seamless canvas
of life and being,
utters a tribute,
to the unsuspecting universe,
and the abstract that fills the concrete,
flashes its poetry
in the agonies of existence.
a playful bud innocently
smiles its birth,
in the courtyard.
Life is beautiful.
An excellent write, it captures the beauty of the universe....and mind of man....a poetry in motion! ! ! ! ! !
dear sarvesh.....i can read your inconsistent thoughts over and over, and not get tiredeach stanza beautifully projected, as seperate moods of one sarvesh! this one is going down in my favourites.......ritty
I am so impressed with how well you express yourself. Favourite lines were: 'the seamless canvas of life and being, utters a tribute, to the unsuspecting universe, and the abstract that fills the concrete, flashes its poetry in the agonies of existence.' Will add this one to my favs. -thanks, roshni.
Life is beautiful and your poem too.Thanks for your comment on my poem.
a playful bud inocently smiles its birth in the courtyard. i love these lines, beautiful, thanks
Consistency of good quality writing in -.... some inconsistent thoughts. Great! ! Keep it up. Thanks
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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draped in words, a thought forms poetry, disrobed, a consciousness. a great thought far beyond your age!