...Still Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni

...Still

Rating: 5.0


A faded out meaning
of the ineffable,
still lingers, languidly
in the hollow word,
of language and its translated beauty.

The lost cadence,
of cosmic indulgence,
still slumbers its rhythm
in the echoing depth,
of a man’s consciousness.

The song of eternity,
of infinite life,
though smothered into a groping lullaby,
still renders its remnants,
to the seeking palm
of the hesitant man.

A vague cry
from deep within a man’s chest,
still seeks its echo
in the ancient hallway
of a life-less wisdom,
but alive-
with a fragile vulnerability
of a creator’s pulse.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 24 May 2009

'A vague cry from deep within a man’s chest, still seeks its echo' An excellent poem with amazing imagery.10+++

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Indira Babbellapati 25 May 2009

are you 19 or 9i.....! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Sindhu Bhargav 25 July 2009

hi, i read a few poems of yours.i think u write very well......n a liked tis 1 quite a lot....wonderful i believe

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Anjali Sinha 03 June 2009

so much depth and philosopy here that i had to read it twice lovely +++10 anjali

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Shekhar Joshi 02 June 2009

excellently written.......WOW

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Roshni D'Souza 30 May 2009

Wow...truly deep...last stanza is stunning! Thanks, roshni.

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Kesav Easwaran 30 May 2009

words deep and heavy...profound write, Sarvesh...thanks 10

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