...The Creator's Struggle Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni

...The Creator's Struggle

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The uneven shadows
of a ghastly nightmare
cast their indescretions
upon my silently closed eyes.

The poignant pointlessnesses
of the unexpressed emotions
surface in my eye-pupils
and their glistening encore
gets lost,
in the tremendousness
of the mist of irony.

I grope in despair,
at the hidden archives
of my being,
and come up with a painful pang
of abstract unexpression
which might be the birth-root
of all this enormous creation.

[Inspired by the belief that the universe is just the non-absolute expression of God]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 05 October 2009

a very great write this is the truth the universe is the living proof and we are the living truth that God is our Creator... We have to accept the truth.... thanks for sharing this brilliant write 10++++ Lovelots, Maia

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Kesav Easwaran 27 September 2009

Yes; this universe is only a non-absolute expression of God...God alone is Absolute and Truth...Padhosya Viswa Bhoothani (Purusa Sooktha) - whole universe created out of a part (of Him) ...highly intellegent highly philosophical work... revealing write...10

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