...Random Musing-4 Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni

...Random Musing-4

Rating: 5.0


your dawn,
awfully awesome.
my night,
awesomely awful.

darkness,
kindles light in me.
crawling in my depth,
I reach atop

I lose my soul,
in the ambience,
the conspiring universe,
hides its glamour in my eyes.
and my crude being,
I flaunt in the ocean’s womb.
the starry cloak, of an everlasting remembrance,
sucks my memory,
and blesses with a spontaneity,
that erupts in words.

I lose my all,
to gain 'all'.
I write my all,
to seek a sweet solace

crept in my conscience,
a silent thought,
origin-less,
without a destiny,
a moment’s birth,
sublime in its essence,
lasts in my spilt ink.

why the hell do I call it my own?


[i know this poem seems futlie and unnecessary/without context, but i really dunno what it is, couldn't even find a title.
excuse the abruptness of it, but its all that came, and the way it came..]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Priyanka Bhowmick 28 June 2009

watever it is... i liked the flow of words.. :)

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I lose my all, to gain 'all'. Excellent! What a composition? What this all? Must be LOVE. Ten dr. sakti 13.08.09.

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Ritty Patnaik 09 July 2009

your poem comes from ether, and your thoughts too! expressed yourself beautifully.

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 28 June 2009

thanks to indira maam for the fourth stanza, credit goes to her for adding great depth to the poem. thank you very much maam.

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Indira Babbellapati 28 June 2009

I lose my all, to gain 'all'. I write my all, to seek a sweet solace....not that what you wrote isn't good, just felt like it to give a deeper philosophical dimension...

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Maitreyee Joshi 28 June 2009

that is a soul of the poet in u talking.

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