Smiles Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Smiles

Rating: 5.0


You and I and a fishing pole,
going down to the old watering hole.
Spending the summer days, fishing
under the sunny rays. Watching the
cat tails wave, as the fish teased and
played. Talking of nature, God, and
all he's made. And how moments
like this we wouldn't trade. And even
as the sun began to set, we didn't
want to go in yet. But, Mom would soon
be on the shoreline, to let us know dinner
is set. Standing there smiling even if, we
came home with an empty net.

Tuesday, September 21, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: Family,beautiful,memories
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 September 2021

A lovely poem that captures the wonders of life through the beauty of nature and our deep faith in God. Beautifully crafted and so well expressed tenderly. To my Poem List

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 September 2021

Such a beautiful poem! My great pleasure revisiting this cute poem.

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Bill Cantrell 23 September 2021

Very beautiful, what I call free-verse, loved it!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 September 2021

Lovely memories.....a wonderful glimpse of the past.. Beautifully written!

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