I see your tear stained cheeks, your soft green eyes
turn so dark and deep. Knowing I just need to wait with
perseverance, for these stormy times to pass. Watch you
as, your finger gently traces the rim of your glass. Know
the sunshine doesn't always last. But when our hearts
lock, these clouds we can get past. And know again some
day the sun will find, and touch your smiling face. And once
again your eyes'll hold such love and grace. And once again
the pieces of life will fall back into place. Know the rains
can't be hurried, or erased. But know if you'd just touch my
hand, I'd do the best I can to make you feel so safe. Until
then I'll just sit here by the sea, and wait for you patiently,
to fall back into me.
I must tell you that I have come across your poem, I have been missin g this for one whole day! I lost my way (again)
This Valentine poem is worth to be reading again and again, dear Becca! A most beautiful, tender and touching poem about true love! 5 stars I have given here below but I wish to give once again 5 Stars!
As dear Captain Sir said here below: An elegant piece of writing simply beautiful and I add here Most Beautiful, my dear Becca!
beautifully depicted the storms among the tides; it's meaningful to the life of love
I totally love this line-- Watch you as, your finger gently traces the rim of your glass. ---that is setting the scene with poetic style! ! ! top marks
"Knowing I just need to wait with perseverance, for these stormy times to pass." It's great to find someone with patience and loyalty like that but not so common!
A wonderful poem so tenderly and lovingly expressed. Spellbinding images that could enable us to feel the wonderful attributes and magic of love. A poetic gem.
How beautiful our life is when you find someone who will do his very best to make you feel so safe and loved.
Penned with such depth, emotion, longing and love. Fabulous Poem dear Poetess.....Top marks
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is an utmost love poem so brilliantly worded, I have enjoyed very much of every single line! 5 Stars and to my Favourites.This is true love at its best!