Smile Poem by Sandhya S.N

Smile

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I use to wear it so simply
The radiant armor, my pretty smile
One can see me as warrior
While I wear it brilliantly

I sometimes may conquer hearts
Consent, console and pardon
And sometimes I dagger hearts
And deflagrate the mind too fast

It won’t hide my glowing face
Nor it veil over my wish
But it hides my lurid look
My weeping eyes and face at times

Yet I stick to show my will
Brave and bold and stronger still
Hence I wear the armor! SMILE!
That glows my eyes and fervent heart


02.04.2009
sandhya

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vidyadhar Durgekar 24 April 2009

Spell bounding composition....................

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Riya Riska 24 April 2009

Love your work very much, sister! Smile..cost nothing, but smile..means everything.. Great written, thankz 4 sharing, I enjoy it very much.

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sky dreams 24 April 2009

i love you described your smile as your armour.. great write 10

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rago rago 24 April 2009

you are absloutely write.........smile is a weapon and smile shower the essentce of live/life.........many thaks for your sharing.

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Ruth Walters 24 April 2009

Very poignant, very touching and a good read. It makes the reader curious to know what is behind the smile or mask you wear so bravely. The poem is a mask to your feelings eh? Sometimes though, it is good to let people know you are not as happy as they might think, sometimes it is good to let the mask slip. Keep writing - you're good. Ruthy: -D

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Nikunj Sharma 25 June 2009

Yet I stick to show my will Brave and bold and stronger still Hence I wear the armor! SMILE! That glows my eyes and fervent heart this is simply superb...I invite you to read my poem called SMILES and BOOKMARK...Shall be grateful for your feedback

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C. P. Sharma 25 May 2009

It is smile that cuts so deep Even then man doesn't weep CP

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Muhammad Ali 06 May 2009

It is amazing! a fluid to heart! sore or sweet... but it is!

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premji premji 05 May 2009

sandhya, you wrote this poem with a dagger in the heart... are you going to stab me?

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a fine write on smile...we havemany ofit...friendly...vicious...

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Sandhya S.N

Sandhya S.N

Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala, India
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