Solemn Oath And Truth Poem by Sandhya S.N

Solemn Oath And Truth

Rating: 5.0


It is the proclaim by mystic
Illegible ordain on forehead
Both sage and savage shall take
The solemn oath to let be born

One may get scared at sight
Even those symptoms of sigh
And suspect it as the tide
That engulfs to divine the oath

He is wicked and witty
Without aware of stage etiquette
He plays the game cunningly
And make beware, the evil oath

I took that oath in hurry burry
In that haste of visit to earth
He carved it in illegible letters
The time and tide of my reclaim

How and when I don’t know still
But it haunts me as menace
That entwines me to brutal kill
To make my oath realistic pride

I know well that I can’t find
Get rid of those wicked spies
Who always ramble along with me
And spell that oath to remind me

You and I shall always be
Aware of that divine truth
We shall return this world once
With bare foot and with barren hands


03.04.2009
Sandhya

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
premji premji 24 April 2009

true understanding......true to the core.....10

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Okan Emanet 24 April 2009

It is really powerful. The emotions can only be expressed in that manner. Congratulations! another 10

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sky dreams 24 April 2009

this poem is captivating.. awesome write!

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Joseph Poewhit 24 April 2009

Has a deep tone to it

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rago rago 24 April 2009

just u have pictured the realily.........in simple and truthful verse I enjoyed the reading. your tone is very nice.......keep it on dear poet friend.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 26 April 2009

We shall return this world once With bare foot and with barren hands..............Good Write...........

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Private Girl 26 April 2009

its amazing please take a look at my poems too :)

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Noel Horlanda 26 April 2009

You are a great writer, my friend. Fulfill your oath and speak the truth no matter what. An encouraging write, keep it up...10+

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Subroto Chatterjee 25 April 2009

Sandhya, I solemnly say...that...I'm still trying to figure this one out. Cheers. Subroto

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Ruth Walters 24 April 2009

Another interesting poem but I liked the other one better. Still not bad. Ruthy

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Sandhya S.N

Sandhya S.N

Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala, India
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