Jahan zaib

Rookie - 55 Points (February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

Slogan of Patriot


I have not lost hope
Nor am I defeated
Holding one end of the rope
Let’s help this ship
Stay safe in muddy water
There’s a bright ray of hope
In eyes of my youth
Then join me my dears
To lift your beloved home
As high as the star
Let’s wet this earth of our land
With sweats of hard work
Tears of joy
That comes after a win
A win after an almost defeat
There’s no retreat
For it will break us
Unity, the only solution
Honesty, the only key
To the gate
Of wealth and prosperity.

Submitted: Tuesday, June 18, 2013
Edited: Friday, July 26, 2013

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Comments about this poem (Slogan of Patriot by Jahan zaib )

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (7/3/2013 11:22:00 AM)

    i started reading this piece and i was amazed i finished reading it and i am amazed for you... beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 602 Points Shahzia Batool (6/20/2013 10:56:00 AM)

    I have not lost hope
    Nor am I defeated
    Holding one end of the rope
    Let’s help this ship

    inspiring lines, right spirit! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,093 Points Valsa George (6/19/2013 11:36:00 PM)

    Unity, the only solution
    Honesty, the only key
    To the gate
    Of wealth and prosperity.

    Yes, let us stand together! Work together! For a better morrow! ! A great exhortation! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 987 Points Unwritten Soul (6/18/2013 1:29:00 PM)

    Heart of a patriot is never be compared to any challenge, because once it is given, a hope for a nation to rise
    and rise of the nation is never so real if it never based on slogan of patriot that lives in honest heart
    and in you Jahan Jan, i found it is there, there..you own it, the precious gem_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (6/18/2013 1:03:00 PM)

    Honesty, the only key
    To the gate
    Of wealth and prosperity...yeah we should be united to save our country from any evil eye & enemies..i must say it deserved to say modern Patriotism (Report) Reply

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